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Friday, 19 October 2012

Some Incredible Writing!

We watched the you tube clip about Felix who jumped out of a capsule to break the world record for the fastest and highest sky dive. We wrote how Felix must have felt...


As I looked out of the hatch, I thought "Oh Man, why did I decide to do this!"
I was frozen. Absolutely terrified of what I was about to do.
My helmet was fogging up. I felt horribly sick. I had come this far, but was it enough. Suppose something went wrong.
I pushed that thought out of my mind and...
Jumped!

By Ben Ch

I stepped to the exit.
No... I stepped back.
I breathed heavily. I stepped to the exit one last time and stayed there.
I looked down and saw the desert.
" I believe I can do it." I say to myself over and over again.
I leap.
"Wow I can't believe it I did it! I did it!"

By Jamie

I can't believe there is a possibility that I might die right now. I really regret this. But I might win a world record- which choice should I take?
Goosebumps were crawling all over me.
I'll do it!

By Kirk

2 comments:

  1. What great descriptions you have written, Kirk, Jamie and Ben of how you think Felix would have felt! I have sky dived a few times myself so I think Felix was a very brave man!!

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    1. Wow! We never knew you sky dived. How many times have you jumped from a plane and how high have you been?

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